An excellent first review - thoughtful and well-written :)
Just a couple of points - make sure that you proof read before posting... you have a couple of things in there that don't make sense - 'there since of power' should be 'their sense of power', I imagine? Also, try and embed the quotes, rather than just dropping them in. One way to do this is via the author's name, so for example, 'As Leow explains, "The themes behind German Expressionism films often revolved around insanity..." (Leow, 2016)
Hi Louis!
ReplyDeleteAn excellent first review - thoughtful and well-written :)
Just a couple of points - make sure that you proof read before posting... you have a couple of things in there that don't make sense - 'there since of power' should be 'their sense of power', I imagine?
Also, try and embed the quotes, rather than just dropping them in. One way to do this is via the author's name, so for example,
'As Leow explains, "The themes behind German Expressionism films often revolved around insanity..." (Leow, 2016)
Looking forward to your next review!