Just another quick addition...Always make sure that you proof-read, so that what you think you have said is what you have actually written. For example you say that the review will 'decline into madness'... Maybe you meant that the review will look at the nuns' decline into madness? You also have a typo towards the end, where you are 'remanding' the viewer, instead of 'reminding' them - one little letter can make all the difference to your meaning! :)
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ReplyDeleteInteresting review Louis :)
ReplyDeleteHi again Louis!
DeleteJust another quick addition...Always make sure that you proof-read, so that what you think you have said is what you have actually written. For example you say that the review will 'decline into madness'... Maybe you meant that the review will look at the nuns' decline into madness?
You also have a typo towards the end, where you are 'remanding' the viewer, instead of 'reminding' them - one little letter can make all the difference to your meaning! :)