A well-structured and well thought through review Louis :)
Just a couple of pointers - you can afford to make your images bigger so that the reader can have a really good look at them; rather than embedding them in the text as you have done here, give them their own space. You are missing a couple of 'r's here and there, where you wanted to say 'adventurers' I believe, but just have 'adventures'... In your bibliography, you should order the titles by author's surname then initial, and they should be listed alphabetically, for example, Bloggs, J. Jones, A Smith, T.
A well-structured and well thought through review Louis :)
ReplyDeleteJust a couple of pointers - you can afford to make your images bigger so that the reader can have a really good look at them; rather than embedding them in the text as you have done here, give them their own space.
You are missing a couple of 'r's here and there, where you wanted to say 'adventurers' I believe, but just have 'adventures'...
In your bibliography, you should order the titles by author's surname then initial, and they should be listed alphabetically, for example,
Bloggs, J.
Jones, A
Smith, T.
Looking forward to reading your next review!