A couple of typos in here... you have 'going up' instead of 'growing up', and the aboriginal 'already experienced and well versed in the way of the dessert' (which sounds good to me!) but it should be 'desert'... You should also make sure that you italicise the film title, to distinguish it in this case, from the noun 'walkabout'.
Hi Louis,
ReplyDeleteA couple of typos in here... you have 'going up' instead of 'growing up', and the aboriginal 'already experienced and well versed in the way of the dessert' (which sounds good to me!) but it should be 'desert'...
You should also make sure that you italicise the film title, to distinguish it in this case, from the noun 'walkabout'.
I enjoyed reading this, Louis.
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